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A hole in one (anthro raccoon TF TG)

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    “Hey Johnny, have you ever played mini golf?” Blue asked his friend as he was looking over the mail he had received.

    “It’s been awhile since I played.” Johnny said. “Why do you ask?” He looked over at his friend.

    “Well, it seems that this new mini golf place opened up, and to celebrate the grand opening,, the prices are half off, and the concessions are FREE!”

    “Wow that sounds like a steal.” Johnny chuckled.”If you want to go, I will join you.”

    “You BET I wanna go.” Blue said as he set the rest of the mail down and grabbed his keys. “Keep up slowpoke!” Blue chuckled as he briskly walked to the door.

    “Right behind you man.” Johnny said as he got up and walked out the door, after him.

    Blue locked the door after them, and rechecked the address. “Looks like it's not too far.” he said as Johnny went to the car, and got in the passenger side. “Buckle up buddy.” He teased and got in the driver’s side and started the engine..

    “Yeah yeah, just try not to go too far over the speed limit this time.” Johnny gulped a bit as he buckled up “Honestly I am surprised you have not gotten a ticket yet.”

    Blue gave a nervous chuckled as he buckled up. “Okay okay I will take it at a slower pace, but  am a bit excited. Blue pulled out of the driveway, and headed off the the listed address.

    After about a 20 min drive, the two landed at their destination. “There now, that wasn't too bad.” Blue said proudly as they parked the car in a space.

    “That was pretty fast man, but could we just have walked?” Johnny gave a small sigh of relief as the car stopped and Blue shut the engine off.

    “That would have taken longer, and would not grant us the luxury of air condition in 85 degree weather. Besides, I only went 3 miles over the speed limit this time, a reasonable pace I say.” He chuckled.

    “I can handle the heat pretty well.” Johnny shrugged. “Nonetheless, let’s get inside, I am honestly really excited for this!” He smiled.

    Yeah yeah, no need to tell me twice.” Blue chuckled as they walked to the building. Blue looked up and read the sign. “”The Magical forest mini golf extravagance” Weird name.” Blue shrugged

    Johnny stroked his chin. “I kinda like it, it has character.” He said a he looked it over for a bit. “Let’s go inside and see what it's all about.”

    Blue nodded and walked over to the booth with johnny. “Hello gentleman!” The Man said happily. ‘Welcome to the  Magical forest mini golf extravagance! How can I help you?” He smiled

    “One please.” blue said and offered his money.

    “Thank you sir.” he said and looked over at Johnny. “And you my good man?” Blue stepped aside and let Johnny pay. “Thank you. And what color balls would you like?”

    “I’ll take a blue one sir.” Blue said as he gave a small chuckled.

    “Orange for me.” the man handed him an orange ball. “Putters are right over there, have fun, and good luck with a hole in one, our courses are pretty tough.” He chuckled.

    “Thank you sir.” Blue said as he looked over to the putters, and picked one out that felt comfortable. “Ready Johnny?” Blue asked as johnny got one and nodded in agreement. “Great, then let's hit the links.”

    “Lead the way man.” Johnny aid as they approached the first hole, squirrel.

    Blue set his ball down. “Alright then.” He stood over it and breathed deeply. He gave the ball a small wack and sent it down the course, however it bounced off a plastic rock and went rolling back towards Blue. “Okay its been awhile since I played..” His face turned bright red ass he blushed.

    Johnny chuckled as he saw Blue’s reaction “Its been awhile for me too man. Let's see how well I do.” Johnny set his ball down, lined up his shot and gave it a tap. The ball stopped short of the hole.

    “You did better than I did.” Blue sighed as he looked over the outdoor environment. “I do like the design of this place. “Lots of trees, cute plastic animals, even the holes seemed to be named after animals. It has good atmosphere.” He said happily. “I suppose it does live up to its name.”

    “Yeah the place is nice” Johnny said as he got his ball in the hole. “Two strokes, one under par.” he said happily.

    ‘You got lucky.” He said and marked it on his card. Blue went again and got it in 2 strokes later. “Okay i got par, not a bad start.” He said and marked it. “So, you are in the lead.”

    “Hey, I am only ahead by one, it’s not that big a lead. Also, it’s only the first hole.” Johnny chuckled.

    Blue gave a small sigh as the two went hole after hole, Johnny would keep his lead while Blue was trailing behind by 1 to 2 strokes.

    “Alrighty, now that I am warmed up, it’s time for my comeback!” Blue declared as they came to the raccoon hole.

    “I’ll be waiting for it.” Johnny laughed in response.

    Blue gave a small snort and then a deep breath as he concentrated. He gave the ball a hit and it rolled down the fairway, bouncing off the obstacles. Blue watched in anticipation as it kept going, eventually landing in the hole. “YES!” Blue said happily and gave a small jump “HOLE IN ONE!” He said proudly.

    “Nice shot man.” Johnny gave blue a golf clap “My turn.” He said as he positioned himself while Blue retrieve his ball.

    The moment he was clar, Johnny took his shot. Both of them watched in wonder as it started to roll down the course, eventually stopping inside the hole as well “Hole in one!” Johnny laughed.

    Blue went a bit slack jawed as he saw that shot  land perfectly. “Lucky shot.” He grumbled as he marked it down on the card.

    “Luck has nothing to do with it good sir, it's all skill.” He chuckled.

    “I can still win this.” Blue said, even though they were now on the last hole.

    “We shall see sir, I am ahead by three strokes.”

    “Hey that just mean you need to screw up 4 times and then I can win.” Blue chuckled as he noticed a sign posted by the hole “”Score a hole in one for a mystery prize inside.” Perhaps they mean a free game?” Blue asked after he read the sign. “Also, they must not have named this one yet, no name.” He shrugged

    “Probably.” Johnny shrugged “Also, free games are nice. I would love to come back to this place."

    “Me too, but hopefully when it’s a lot cooler out here? I think the heat is starting to get to me,” He sighed a bit and tugged on his shirt. “Let’s get this over with and get a cold soda.”

    “I can get behind that.” Johnny laughed “I am starting to get a bit hot myself.”

    “Yeah.” Blue said as he looked at the challenge before them. The final hole was a super steep hill with the hole on top. Behind the hole was a drop off. There was a net in front of the hill to prevent cheaters. “This looks tough, but I know I can do this.” Blue gave a gulp as he whacked the ball. It rolled up the hill with high speed as blue hoped it was not too hard. Blue got lucky as it did not roll too hard at the top, and landed in the hole. “HA!”

    “Hey you got it.” Johnny said with a smirk, “Now let's see what I can do.” Johnny took a shot, sending it up the hill and just barely making the hole in one.

    “Oh the...wind knocked it in for you.” Blue protested, though there was not a single breast.

    “Whatever you say man.” Johnny laughed, “Either way, both of us got a free game!”

    “Yes that is nice, but I could really use that soda now.” Blue panted as they headed for inside the building, “Also some food, maybe a chicken sandwich, or a fish sandwich.” Blue pondered

    “That seems oddly specific.” Johnny laughed. “I am fine on the hunger side, but I could really use a drink.”

    “Well it is a bit odd, but you do get specific cravings for things sometimes.” He laughed as refreshing AC hit their body the moment they entered. “Oh that feels so good.” He moaned a bit in delight.

    “Nice and cool, just how I like it.” Johnny chuckled

    “Well I see a soda fountain, I am gonna be over there if ya need me, so-duh.” Blue chuckled at his small pun.

    Johnny gave a small groan at what blue said “Could you get me one too man?”

    “Sure, have a seat man.” Blue said as he walked over to the fountain to grab some drinks. Johnny went to sit down, but would feel some discomfort as he sat.

    “Odd..” Johnny said to himself as he fidgeted in his seat to try and get  comfortable. However, that would make things worse, and even cause a small amount of pain. “Ow.” He winced. Johnny tried to look back to see what was going on, he thought he saw some swelling back there. “What is that?” he said out loud and went to feel the area that hurt.

    “What's wrong bro?” Blue asked, returning with 2 sodas, and seeing you fidget.

    ”It feels like something is, behind me?” he said as he felt the tender spot again. “I just can't get comfortable in my seat.”

    “Stand up.” Blue asked as johnny stood up “huh, were you stung by a bee or something? It does looks like a swollen lump there. Seems like a bad spot too.” He winced.

    ‘I don’t think I was.” Johnny said. “This is weird.”

    “Perhaps you should go check it out in the bathroom?” Blue said as he took a drink of soda.

    “Might as well, I am kinda worried.” He admitted.

    “Alright, I see the restrooms are over there.” Blue pointed, not realizing he had directed his friend to the ladies room.

    “Thanks man, I’ll try to be back quickly.’ he said and headed over, not realizing where he was going.

    “Hope he is okay.” Blue sighed as he drank more of the soda.

    Johnny went inside the restroom and locked the door behind him. “What a weird day..” he sighed. Hif face would start to feel itchy as he would scratch at his scruffy beard. “What now?” he groaned and looked over into a mirror. He would notice his face becoming more and more covered by his facial hair, “What the heck?” He said as a sharp pain from his behind pulled his attention  away from that.

    “OW!” He cried out and turned to look. A rather large bulge was visible and pushing against his pants. “WHAT IS THAT!?” He cried and undid his belt and lowered his pants. As is if realized the sudden freedom, the lump quick grew out into a long tail. Gray fur started to quickly engulf the new appendage, with black rings covering the tip. Johnny just looked back and stared in disbelief at it. Luckily for him that alleviated the pain and discomfort he was  feeling, as your new tail seemed to sway happily, but Johnny was still dumbfounded by what just happened “Uh..” was all he was able to get out as he controlled it.

    Johnny’s attention would be pulled back to his face as it slowly stretched out into a muzzle. Johnny gabe a few moans of pain as he could hear the cracking of his skull as it shifted. His teeth would ache as they became longer and sharper. Johnny nose slowly  turned black and shrink to fit the tip of his new muzzle. He would cough a bit as he could not breath for a moment as his nose would feel stuffed. That cleared quite quickly as his sense of smell returned, but it would be more sensitive.

    When that subsided, johnny looked down his new line of sight, and went to stroke it. He would feel some whiskers sprouting out of the side of his furry muzzle. He went to the mirror to get a better look. Hiss reflection would show black fur starting to to sprout around his eyes, giving him the familiar masked look of a raccoon. As he reached up to feel it, he winced and quickled pulled his hand back “Ow.” he hissed out and looked at his hand. Hiss nails were becoming sharper as they became a bit longer and looked like claws.

    “Just..what is going on!?” Johnny said nervously  looking over his hands more gray fur was growing on the tops. He looked over the undersides and saw pads started to grow on his palms.

    The fur was slowly starting to move up his arms. As it traveled, his arms would start to look a bit more slender looking.

    “I’m..I’m becoming some sort of...raccoon thing?” he gasped as he was looking over his arms.

    .Johnny would hear a knocking on the door “Hey Johnny, you okay in there? Everything alright? You been in there for awhile.” Blue called out. “I got a bit thirsty and drank your soda, don’t worry I will buy you a new one.” He chuckled.

    “Yeah! Yeah you do that!” he called out nervously. “I'm really not fine right now, but I am not sure you can help me with this issue!”

    “What you got your zipper stuck in there or something?” blue would laugh as the fur reached your shoulders, your frame was shrinking, becoming less broad. Johnny would be scratching his chest as the fur was starting to engulf that too.

    “I kinda wish it was just that.” He called back as his voice was getting higher in pitch and was cracking.

    Blue was really confused as he heard your voice. “Um, what is going on man?” he said as he grabbed the handle and tried to open it. ”Could you open the door?”

    Johnny stared at the door, quite nervously ass now he felt an unfamiliar weight growing on his chest, “Now..what?” he gulped and looked down. He would see breast slowly swelling up on his chest. Johnny covered his muzzle ass he tried not to scream, staring ass they grew to about a B cup and pressed against his shirt, showing off his midriff that was covered with a  lighter gray fur.

    “A-ah..I’M NOT SUPPOSED TO HAVE THESE!” He shouted so loudly that Blue could hear him clearly from the other side of the door.

    “Have what!? JOHNNY PLEASE OPEN THE DOOR!” He accidentally shouted getting frustrated from worry.

    Johnny growled a bit in annoyance “FINE!” he shouted and opened the door, revealing the furry, feminine thing he was becoming.

    Blue was speechless ass h stared back at what he saw. His mouth was agape and his jaw was slack as he looked at his friend. Is eyes frozen in a state of shocked surprise.

    “If you are gonna make me open the door, you better SAY SOMETHING!” He scolded back. “Why am I turning into some kind of furry woman!?” He glared back.

    Blue still shocked at what he saw, quickly ran into the bathroom with you, and locked the door behind him “The...hell..?” he was finally able to get out as he kept looking at you. His face would be bright red in embarrassment.

    “Did you do this to me?” He said ass he got muzzle to face with blue, still freaking out about the changes.

    “ME!? NO! WHAT EVEN!?..HOW EVEN..!?” He stumbled over his words.

    Before Johnny could get another word out, his manhood would start to burn. Instinctively he brought his hand down to hold the area, almost knowing what was going to happen next, he could feel it shrinking at a rapid pace as it was pulled inside his body. “Oh no...not that..” she groaned too late as it was gone and replaced with something new.

    “What..just happened?” Blue asked nervously, though given how Johnny reacted, he already knew the answer. Blue actually saw Johnny’s hips become wider,  as well as the gray fur traveling down her legs.

    “I just turned into a raccoon woman is what happened!” Johnny snapped back.

    “A rather sexy raccoon woman.” Blue blurted out and quickly covered his mouth as he blushed again.

    “Don’t even start with that!” She snarled. “Why did I just turn into this is my question!”

    “I DON’T KNOW!” Blue accidentally shouted. He took a deep breath and then sighed “Okay..Okay, I am sorry for yelling, I am just..so very confused right now.” He walked around and held his head.

    “You're confused?! How do you think I feel? I have boobs! I am not supposed to those!” She pointed at them.

    Blue found himself staring right at them, he tried not to smile as he though he felt some blood drip from his nose.

    “Okay stop looking, eyes up here buddy!” Blue snapped out of it as he looked you in the eyes. “Could you please figure out why this happened? Ask an employee or something?”

    “Um..Sure.” he said ass he was getting quite flushed and felt extremely warm again “I’ll..I’ll..”

    Johnny sighed and shook her head sadly. “Please just go, I don't enjoy this. Blue found himself suddenly giving her a hug, and patting her on the back. “Just..please go figure out what happened, okay?” she replied back and sighed.

    “Alright.” Blue said as he broke free from the hug. As he broke away, Johnny;s clothing would start to magically alter. Her shirt would become an orange blouse and the pants would alter to a skirt. Underneath the clothing, Johnny would feel a bra appear, and under the skirt, a comfortable pair of panties, complete with tail hole.

    “Hey, you keep looking better and better.” He laughed and admired your your new attire.

    “This is already weird enough for me, without you trying to hit on me.” She blushed. “Go get help!”

    “Okay..okay..” Blue sighed, “Let's just hope this day can't get worse.” He groaned and scratched her chest as he left the bathroom.

    “Yeah worse, I have no idea how that is possible.” Johnny mumbled as she looked in the mirror and saw her hair getting longer and forming into a ponytail.She noticed that her ears were also now on top of her head and poking out through her hair. With another sight she kept looking at her reflection. “I do look...good.” She admitted as she swung her tail.

    Blue closed the door and hear the lock click behind him, He gave a deep sigh “Damn..my life.” Blue groaned.

    Blue suddenly felt his body temp skyrocket, even inside the AC building his body was starting to gain a sweat. He fell to his knees as he panted heavily. “Oh..crap!” he cried as his face was starting to hurt. He was able to close his eyes, and  tried to grit his teeth, but that became impossible as he felt his face stretching out into a muzzle of his own. Blue kept his eyes closed as he felt the painful tugging and shifting. When it stopped, he was scared, and know, but slowly opened his eyes, and his vision was met with a muzzle of his own. His nose tickled, causing him to sneeze several times in succession. Each sneeze slowly shrinking his nose until it was small and black at the tip of his muzzle.

    Blue would feel his hands crack and ache a bit as he held them, looking down he would see fur engulfing them, while his nail were growing out into claws. “Oh...CRAP!” he cried as he kept staring at them.

    Blue would also feel some cramps coming from his feet, as there were changing too, claws would be seen bursting out of the front as the shoes would feet tighter, “No time to look.” Blue whimpered a she was able to get up. “JOHNNY!” Blue cried and pounded on the bathroom door “JOHNNY OPEN UP! LET ME IN!”

    “What now?” Johnny groaned and unlocked the door, She opened it up and gasped a she looked at blue with his new face and claws.

    “Things got wo...wo..” He moaned a bit in pain and looked behind himself. He gasped as he saw swelling back there. Using his new claws he ripped his pants to form a makeshift tail hole, giving a loud moan of relief as the discomfort subsided “Worse.” He squeaked out as his own tail become covered in a  similar fur pattern as Johnny’s

    Blue quickly ran into the bathroom, hitting Johnny in the face with his new tail as he ran to the mirror “Oh god..” He gulped looking at the black mask growing in around his eyes. Blue also saw his ears moving up the side of his head and becoming triangular and furry as they rested on top of his head.

    Johnny spat out the fur that got in her mouth and locked the door, turning to look at Blue “Okay..” She said surprised as she looked at you. “We are having quite an issue here..ma'am.” She said teasingly as she saw breasts swelling on Blue’s chest.

    Blue looked down as he saw them and gave a small screech. “Hey don't tease me like that!” He whimpered as he saw his new assets.

    “Hey, you did it to me, so it's only fair you get some sort of payback, and karma pays it in spades.” she said teasingly and giggled

    Blue growled and tried to give you another whack with his tail. Unaware of the fur that grew out and made his arms and legs look more feminine and petite. “It’s not funny! We are both screwed!”

    Johnny smirked and easily dodged the tail this time. “And it wasn't funny when you did it to me.” She retorted and crossed her arms, groaning as her new breasts got in the way.

    Blue gave a small snort as he looked at her. “Okay, fine. I’m sorry..happy?” She said a bit bitterly as she went back to the mirror to look over her form. She would watch her shoulders narrow, while her hair became longer.

    “Say did um...that change yet?” Johnny said teasingly.

    “That? What do you mean th...AT!” He yelp as he felt a burning down there “Oh..that.”  He said through tearful eyes and whimpered as his old manhood was painfully pulled inside “It's like getting kicked with steel toes boots.”  He said as his voice cracked and feminized as his femininity changes finished. “God damn that hurt.” She said in her new voice, giving a small moan as the pain faded.

    “Yes, trust me, I know that pain.” he sighed and pat his back. Blues ears perked up as he hear his hips crack and become wider. “THis whole thing is just not fun.”

    “But, it's done now...right?” she said hopefully ass she got up and looked over her body. Like with Johnny, her clothing got a shift. His old shirt becoming a blue blouse while thee pants became a skirt as well. A blush would be a bit visible on her face as she also felt the new bra and panties appear too. “Oh..my.” She said nervously. “This is..I..um..” she said unable to find the right words.

    “Yeah, again I kinda know how you feel.” Johnny said and rubbed the back of her head.

    “What is really weird is, I feel...calm now.” she said as she looked at her hands and then at her chest. “I am not...panicking or scared anymore.We lost our humanity, and masculinity, but I feel...okay? This new form feels, nice?” She blushed again.

    “Really? That’s a relief, I was kinda worried it was just me who was feeling that.” Johnny blushed and nodded as he nervously rubbed his arm.

    Blue inhaled deeply and reached up to give her new breast a rub. She gave a small shudder. “Man that...felt weird.” She looked back at her’s, then at yours “I think mine are bigger.” She giggled.

    Johnny rolled her eyes. “Alright MISS, let's go..face the music, We been in here long enough and my nose is really not liking the smell of this bathroom.” She coughed a bit.

    Blue sniffed the air and gagged as well, “How did we not notice it before?” She said and held her nose.

    “Probably because we were too busy worrying about OTHER things?” She said and opened the door and walked out.

    “Oh...yeah.” she chuckled and followed out “Hello?” she called out to the area. Wondering if anyone was around.

    “I don't see anyone.” Johnny said as she looked. Unknowing to them, someone did approach the 2 new ladies from behind.

    “Oh hello ladies, everything okay in there? Are we out of toilet paper?” A male voice chuckled. The two ladies gave a small jump as they turned to look at the new voice. Their gauze would be met with an anthro fox. “I heard some screaming before, are you 2 okay?”

    “Well um, we used to be guys.” Johnny said nervously. Blue gave a small gasp and gave her a whack on the back of his head.

    “That is really not something you should just blurt out.” She said a bit annoyed and sighed.

    The fox apparently chuckled as he heard that “Ah yes, the “special surprise” for getting a hole in one on the last hole. I do say, it is definitely the surprise, right ma cheries?”

    The two new ladies looked at the fox with a shocked expression. “You mean this was SUPPOSED to happen to us?” Johnny asked.

    “Well you 2 DID get a hole in one on the raccoon hole, hence your new furry forms. Then a hole in one at hole 18 to give you both a “Surprise.” He chuckled “Trust me, you 2 are not the first, and probably won’t be the last.”

    “So if we missed any hole, we would still be human, but if we got a hole in one on 18 we would just be female humans?” Blue asked trying to make sense.

“Pretty much, though that does sound a bit boring. Also,if you got a hole in one on any course, but missed 18, you would be male anthros. Furthermore, the changes never start until the game is over, if you get 2 holes in one, the new animal overrides the last one, and so on.”

    “So either way we are stuck as anthropomorphic animals?” Johnny said as she raised an eyebrow. “Shouldn't you at least advertise that these changes would happen?”

    “If I did that, people might avoid this place, I am just running a family friendly business.” he chuckled “Look, the changes are not permanent, they are, if you want them to be.”

    “So this wears off?” Blue asked confused.

    “Not exactly, the only way to get back, is to get a low score in our advanced course out back..” He said and pointed, “This IS a mini golf place after all.”

    “That is a rather underhanded way to regain business, quite fitting for a fox.” Johnny smirked

    “I will take that as a compliment.” He bowed “Oh another thing, you 2 are kinda in a new reality. You know how you never saw anyone else golfing?”

    “That was rather strange, especially when it's opening day.” Johnny commented.

    “That's because once ya changed, you entered a whole new world, a world of anthros. It’s practically the same as your old world, only more shedding.” He chuckled

    Johnny and Blue looked around and gave a small gasp as they saw various other anthros enjoying the concessions. “Yeah..I can imagine.” Johnny said ass she saw them.

    “So, any other questions?” He asked them.

    “No I think you answered everything.” Johnny said. Blue gave a nod in agreement.

    “Great, the offer is always open for you 2 to try and change back, but for now, go have some fun; go shopping, get your tails groomed, get your nails painted.” He leaned in and whispered “GO admire some cute male anthros.” He chuckled

    “M-M-Maybe. I will..I don't really know right now.” Johnny blushed a deep red thinking about them.

    Blue was blushing too. “You ladies have time, don't let me stop you. Have a wonderful day and remember, we are closed on Sundays.” He laughed and walked off

    “So I guess that’s in then?’ Johnny asked Blue.

    “I guess so.” She pondered as her stomach rumbled. “I kinda do want that fish sandwich.” she giggled

    Johnny's stomach rumbles as well. “I am kinda hungry myself, I suppose we can go out and grab a bite to eat.”

    “Awesome, let's head out, you're buying.” She teased as she walked to her car, she found herself swaying her hips a bit as she walked.

    “Alright I can cover you this time, but you are buying the never round.” Johnny chuckled and walked in a similar manner.

    “Looks like my car got a bit of a makeover too.” She said and looked at the modified tail holes in the seats. She got in the driver's side seat. ‘Ya know, the more I stay like this, the more okay I am. I think I would not mind being like this. I feel so comfortable.” the looked at johnny in the other seat. “Heck I can see you wearing a wedding dress and walking down the aisle. WHo's your groom  gonna be? Raccoon? Dog? Fox?” She laughed and started the car

    Johnny chuckled as well, “‘Who knows, I’ll find out when I meet the right person. But I can already picture who you will end up with.

    “Oh really?” Blue said a she started the car.

    “I can see you with a  cat for some reason. Johnny smirked “Me-ow.”

    Blue pondered on that, “Hmm, perhaps a tiger then?” she laughed “Sounds good to me.” She said as the two ladies drove off to enjoy their new lives.


This is a story, based off an RP I did with :iconvinomath:

I'm always trying to find different ways to cause a transformation, and there actually is a place near me where the holes are named after animals.
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CroakerSilent's avatar
Thank you for not having them become sudden lesbians. I love the fact they just stayed good friends! Great story! Any chance there's a bat earred fox hole? ;3